OK, I'm genuinely impressed. I wasn't expecting to get more than "haha, nerd gets feminised and railed by orcs, lol" from the title, but you've made me care about all these characters, laugh, get aroused, and really get invested in the unfolding story. Plus now I have to replay it for Panki's story, and Lel, and maybe even Wejit. I don't know what decisions are major, and what are just cosmetic, it feels like all my choices matter <3
enjoying the game a lot so far! im really excited to see what else you have in store for our goblin buddy, he deserves all the rewards for how hard he works!
Really great game so far with some very clever dialogue. I rarely lol in games. Considering the rarity of fem-protag games of this sort, I'm wondering if there will be more options for Sparkle to get with masculinely built men though without selecting the free-use option. Or alternately, at least adding a potential bi group path to the Lel romance option. Biggest let-down in game so far was in finally getting to an appealing, physically masculine M (Roar) for Sparkle (and Lel), near the end of the content, only for it to turn into nothing when one/both walked over. Since Lel obviously has a "type", throwing in some hot M randos they can enjoy together at various ports and taverns would scratch that itch for all the players - female, male and trans - who it appeals to. Other than the few quick back-alley deals with several random disappointing creeps and a one-off with mentally-subservient Champ, the vast majority of content seems to be with lesbian/trans/sissy partners. (I know Kayden might be an option, but he's physically effeminate/boyish... on top of being a little twat. Definitely a niche appeal). As great as the game is so far, in the lewd realm, I'd say that less than half of your potential audience is being served. Adding some hot, confident, even cocky, masculine-framed men would be a great way to "fill that hole" for them all. There's a bunch of traditionally hot fems - some with peens, some without. Not so much in the male dept though. IMO, especially for a female protagonist game, it's very much needed. Though great job, regardless.
TLDR: Variety of hot, masculine males for protagonist sorely lacking, espec in a fem-protag game. The one-off with Champ (nice but subservient dolt) and potential with Kayden (effeminate face and build, looks 15), aren't really much to work with. All other aspects are great, but that's a big one, pun sort-of intended.
Definitely an awesome game. The walkthrough is a bit messy/overwhelming. Maybe break down the route requirements separate from the main story. Also maybe a list of outfits and their requirements. Stuff like that helps instead having to comb through everything.
Also if the game has a "point-based system" there should be a way to check the current/maximum points in the game. The futa really should have both since that's what translates as or else maybe call it dick-girl. Which brings me to a question. Does the futa route negate pregnancy?
Holy shit this is so good, I find it on par with another personal favorite of mine, Darktoz. It's so good, I love the interchanging options and the like. Next payday I will be joining your patreon. Fantastic work.
Too many games don't focus on a female protagnist, well lewd game, but it is something I really am enjoying! I was heartbroken to be hit with the current end of the game and wish you the best with it. So many people don't take the advantage of it. Though, I've found a few games now that are brilliant.
I like the game, and I think that it has a lot of potential. I've tried to find every path so far, and I've liked most to all of the endings. Is this game being actively worked on?
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OK, I'm genuinely impressed. I wasn't expecting to get more than "haha, nerd gets feminised and railed by orcs, lol" from the title, but you've made me care about all these characters, laugh, get aroused, and really get invested in the unfolding story.
Plus now I have to replay it for Panki's story, and Lel, and maybe even Wejit. I don't know what decisions are major, and what are just cosmetic, it feels like all my choices matter <3
That's very nice to hear! I appreciate your kind words and will try not to disappoint in future updates :)
enjoying the game a lot so far! im really excited to see what else you have in store for our goblin buddy, he deserves all the rewards for how hard he works!
Thank you! There's plenty more in store for Wejit :)
Itch won't let me download and install on PC. There's no option for a file to download for some reason..
That's odd! But I've just uploaded version 0.5H so let me know if that works for you.
That did it! Thanks :)
Really great game so far with some very clever dialogue. I rarely lol in games. Considering the rarity of fem-protag games of this sort, I'm wondering if there will be more options for Sparkle to get with masculinely built men though without selecting the free-use option. Or alternately, at least adding a potential bi group path to the Lel romance option. Biggest let-down in game so far was in finally getting to an appealing, physically masculine M (Roar) for Sparkle (and Lel), near the end of the content, only for it to turn into nothing when one/both walked over. Since Lel obviously has a "type", throwing in some hot M randos they can enjoy together at various ports and taverns would scratch that itch for all the players - female, male and trans - who it appeals to.
Other than the few quick back-alley deals with several random disappointing creeps and a one-off with mentally-subservient Champ, the vast majority of content seems to be with lesbian/trans/sissy partners. (I know Kayden might be an option, but he's physically effeminate/boyish... on top of being a little twat. Definitely a niche appeal). As great as the game is so far, in the lewd realm, I'd say that less than half of your potential audience is being served. Adding some hot, confident, even cocky, masculine-framed men would be a great way to "fill that hole" for them all. There's a bunch of traditionally hot fems - some with peens, some without. Not so much in the male dept though. IMO, especially for a female protagonist game, it's very much needed. Though great job, regardless.
TLDR: Variety of hot, masculine males for protagonist sorely lacking, espec in a fem-protag game. The one-off with Champ (nice but subservient dolt) and potential with Kayden (effeminate face and build, looks 15), aren't really much to work with. All other aspects are great, but that's a big one, pun sort-of intended.
Definitely an awesome game. The walkthrough is a bit messy/overwhelming. Maybe break down the route requirements separate from the main story. Also maybe a list of outfits and their requirements. Stuff like that helps instead having to comb through everything.
Also if the game has a "point-based system" there should be a way to check the current/maximum points in the game. The futa really should have both since that's what translates as or else maybe call it dick-girl. Which brings me to a question. Does the futa route negate pregnancy?
Holy shit this is so good, I find it on par with another personal favorite of mine, Darktoz. It's so good, I love the interchanging options and the like. Next payday I will be joining your patreon. Fantastic work.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words and I'm very happy that you enjoy the game :)
Too many games don't focus on a female protagnist, well lewd game, but it is something I really am enjoying! I was heartbroken to be hit with the current end of the game and wish you the best with it. So many people don't take the advantage of it. Though, I've found a few games now that are brilliant.
Is Darktoz a game? I only found a creator by that name when I searched for it.
He's a creator, I meant to mean it like a another fave creator. He has a few games, such as FEMDOM city mantis!
Oh. Ok thanks. I'll try some of those too.
I have to say I'm in love with this game, it still being worked on?
Yes, I'm working on it! I'll post the public update here on the 27th :)
I like the game, and I think that it has a lot of potential. I've tried to find every path so far, and I've liked most to all of the endings. Is this game being actively worked on?
Yep, sure is! There is another update coming out soon.